Cottonm Fields Chapters 20-through 31

SCottie excellant point about there not being transtion to the trip but it will be in the dialogue through out the book, it will start with them just being excited about going on vacation and seeing the pacific ocean and it will turn into them openlying shouting about not having to see Tiffany for two weeks. (i'm sure the golf game will appear in a couple more parts of the book.) Also scottie i have a modified version of your puke story in chapter 23)

Chapter 21
Dinner with Tom before he heads back to New York. They eat at a place that the ids have to be ran, cuasing another id problems. AFter saying goodbye they return back to cole's where every one falls asleep but Gus and Seth who watch a show on sharks attacks before realizing they will be swimming in the ocean in a day and turn it off. (another chapter that either will get cut or step up and show the other side of these gentleman)

Chapter 22
This is monday morning and they are driving through the desert and have a run in with A not so nice grocery clerk. Also go through a borer check where many illegal immagrent are told. upon arriving at in SD the boys get Taco bell resulting in Gus meeting a girl from the bannan bungalow. Eddie and Seth take off for a walk while Gus and Coop talk to that girl and while on there way back run into a couple of Chirstain girls ROry and Lorijo havinga conversation about the gays in San Fran. Prompting Rule # 5 don't trust people who don't drink from Gus and Seth.

Chapter 23
Tuesday night
Coop turns 21 and and can use his real id,Gus, Seth, and Eddie are waiting for ever on the beach for Coop when he finally arrives, he apoligizes and says he got side track by a nap. They head to Plum Crazy. Seth starts everyone off with a suprise Wild turkey shot. Coop then stars his long list of shots as the guys just drink beer. They are sitting on the balcony when Coop gets sick and the puke runs down into the bar causing to have to leave. Gus wants to stop by the Banana and they meet a couple of french girls this time Hailey and Collen, back to their room for drinks where Haily end up pretty drunk. All 6 of them head for the beach and has Gus and Haily roll around in the waves coop is being taken care of by Collen. Haily and Gus head bed via the pool then the shower, then the bed. Late night Collen wants to head back to her place and they try to get Haily to move but laughter ensues with a oui-no oui-no arguement with haily and seht for five minutes

Chapter 24
Wednesday
Eddied meets a a ncie looking old lady on the beach before the gys head downtown. Some lady bum say he f's little kids. Seth tries to work some magic with a very attractive girl but gets shot down. The guys meet up withteh french girls at the banana bungalow where Gus get's call a back street boy fashion type and where Eddied makes fun of there accents. Collen has shown a nice interest in COop. They all head back to thier hotel. Coop is changing and grabbing a sweatshirt to go for a walk with Collen. Gus tells him to grab a condom Coop says there just going to get high. Mean while Eddie has walk over and offered COllen some chexmix making the scene very awkward. When Coop and Collen leave Eddie comments boy that was awkward making Gus say becuase you made it, arguement ensues.

Chapter 25
Thrusday
Starts with Coop informing everyone that he should have grabbed a condom. Seth and Eddie head for the hottub when Eddied old broad scares the shit of them and telling them to come hang out over by the bay. After a stint in the hot tub, the boysd go looking for Eddie's girl but end up ina wierd part of town and Seth's freaks out Eddie. They head for home pretty fast. Seth and Coop head of the bars but Gus and Eddie decide to Dress up like bums and even hang out witth the rock of SD. Seth is woke up by Gus waving the dollar back they got bumming.

Chapter 26
Friday
Seth, Eddie, and Coop head for mexico, but on the bus is a man in a wheel chair passed out who also has a dog just laying there.Once in mexico they realize that mexican aren't good bussiness men. They get offered sex, drugs, and everything in betweeen. They head fora strip club called Tacos and tequillas where all hell breaks loose meaing they walk out with only coop having money and Eddie getting laid and Seth receiving a blowjob. Coop walks out of the strip club to Eddie in disbelief on bench They head to another bar where the get 10 beers for 10 dollars and a shot of abstintieth for Seth and Seth and coop have bull riding contest. the ride back to thier hotel includes Eddie explanation of bargin shopping and that same guy in a wheel chair and the dog. that started a conversation whether or not he had been there the entire time.

Chapter 27
Back at the hotel the boys are starving and they head for hooters, Eddie meets them out becuase he must shower. They have a extemly attractive trainy waitress who doe s a good job puting up with thier level of drunkeness including ranch shots leading to the boys leaving a huge tip and even trying to clear it nicely with the trainer waitress but Eddie has a choice comment for her. Seth manages to convince the Hot waitress to hang with the boys tomorrow. They run back into the Chirstain girls and when Eddie gets introduced he agains chooses his words wisely. Seth stays and mess with the chirstain girls beliefs while the other three head out to the bar.

Chapter 28
start on saturday morning to the boys waking up and Coop hearing a nutrigina story, Prompting Coop to comment is that nutrugina that's bull shit and then him a gus having a conversation about a cluster colony. The guys head to the beach and play frisbie until Coop let's it hit a guy in the face who was talking to a girl. They hang out b.sing on the beach until Seth gets the call from waitress.

Chapter 29
The boys head to the waitresses apartment for a party but our unwelcomed by a couple of duded who thought that the waitress girl wanted one of thiers. they start being asses and make fun of of eddie's eyebrows. The last straw came when fucked with the smoke machine. the Guys decide to the bar not wanting any trouble their last night. Seth tells the waitress. While this is going on the trouble makers decide to make a couple of more comments. Leading to Gus sayign yeah we are leaving there is no need for any more comments. The assholes continue to taunt and laugh so Gus says if you want to end this meet us outside. Gus and the gang leave thinking is was over but the guys follow them out leading to a fight where Eddie gets tackled by two of them, Coop and Seth hold thier own and Gus with his condor arms cleans house eventaully winning the fight.

Chapter 30
the boy so amped for the fight decide to head to the boys and enjoy their last night. The show up at a bar that's suposed to have a band that night. Coop sets his sights on a girl and actully gets a good conversation with her but she decides to haed back to her table with her friends. Coop comes back deflated. Seth and Gus pick him up with some guidelins for the rest of the night, prompting Seth's favorite rule in life "Wait it out" accompanied with the story it came from. The crowd get's restless has the band hasn't showed up and Seth says screw it let's play, they tell the bar what songs they play and that they'll do it. The bar says no at first by an hour later the band is still a no show and decided to let them play. The rock the house and Coop got his girl. Coop heads out with that girl and The guys hang out with the bar employees after hours and the manager offers them a weekly night.

Chapter 31
Sunday Morning the guys talk it over and vot on whether to stay or not resulting in a serious conversation. Seth, Gus voted to stay Coop said he wouldn't cast the vote to go or stay whatever they decided he would go with and Eddie said he thought they should go back but he wanted to move out here after graduation. With out a uninamous vote they loaded the car. when they went to Start the car it wouldn't. Eddie got out and siad this is your fualt Gus, gus said it was Coop's fault, and then Coop passed the blame to Seth. Then Gus realized it was Sunday and they could just past the buck. Eddie got out his Triple A card and began to call for a tow truck when he suddenly slammed the phone down screw it is' Greg's and Tiff faults and we're staying. The chapter ends with the guys walking to the bar from last night take take that weekly gig


I think this works pretty well. i think i mixed in every stroy the best i could and not get to far off track, i even managed a pass the buck sunday. I hope every one either comments or calls with any other ideas as i sit down to write the first couple of chapters over the next week or so.

cotton fields